I'm back to writing a poem every day, whether they stink or not.

Sunday, July 23, 2006

Saturn

There's a tiny, overgrown island
at one end of the lake. I've never
stepped onto it, but when the water
isn't too low to take the boat around
I imagine the narrow path that might
run from that shallow inlet, up
to the top where I might have built
a small wooden deck with a single
table and a telescope standing
strange as an ostrich in the middle.

You can look at the pale ghost of a planet
through the lens and imagine your own
spirit unsheathed and seeking shelter
on the terrain not even hinted at
byt he smokey jewel in the telescope--
it's enough to look a the gray gleam
with its just-visible rings and dream.

Often it's enought to look at the bony
frame of the telescope with it's barrel
aimed wildly high to dream your dreams.

Sometimes to paddle a circle
around the wild viney island--
and sometime to imagine the island,
the thin boundry of rippling water
between me and the first of its weeds,
and the way it seems to turn as I circle--
sometimes the lumber lays itself
and the telescope turns on its own
agianst the obscene circling of the earth.

2 comments:

Rod said...

You know I have to like this one.

Thanks

BradyDale said...

This one is definitely got lots of great imagery.

Man, it's so great that you're still writing. Remember when were just one of a billion schmucks in our high school with pretensions to writing. How many of them have kept at it, right? But we have, man.

Keep on.